This feels like a myth being told by firelight. The shift from epic battle to something eerie and psychological is so smooth it almost sneaks up on you. I love how “Love” becomes this dangerous force that unravels warriors who can face dragons but not their own longing. The imagery of soldiers turning to iron dust and wandering the labyrinth pulled me in — it’s haunting in a way that lingers after the last line 💖🫶✨
This was such an intriguing read. What struck me most is how Love isn’t just a character here, she’s a force that pulls the prince deeper into himself. The whole story feels like a journey through the mind’s own corridors, where desire, illusion, and longing slowly take over.
The moment he lowers his shield hit hard. It wasn’t weakness, it’s exactly how real enchantment works. Love speaks straight to the mind, past every defense we think we’ve built.
And the ending lands perfectly. He wins every battle, builds a kingdom, yet forgets the one promise everything was built on. It makes the final twist feel inevitable, if you forget the source of what you’re given, the price eventually returns.
Beautifully written, mythic yet psychological. Really enjoyed this piece. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Your story stayed with me long after I finished reading, so it was a joy to sit with each scene more closely. I’ll be glad to meet you again in future texts, please keep writing, the world needs more of this kind of mythic depth.
This feels like a myth being told by firelight. The shift from epic battle to something eerie and psychological is so smooth it almost sneaks up on you. I love how “Love” becomes this dangerous force that unravels warriors who can face dragons but not their own longing. The imagery of soldiers turning to iron dust and wandering the labyrinth pulled me in — it’s haunting in a way that lingers after the last line 💖🫶✨
Thank you for your nice comment.
This was such an intriguing read. What struck me most is how Love isn’t just a character here, she’s a force that pulls the prince deeper into himself. The whole story feels like a journey through the mind’s own corridors, where desire, illusion, and longing slowly take over.
The moment he lowers his shield hit hard. It wasn’t weakness, it’s exactly how real enchantment works. Love speaks straight to the mind, past every defense we think we’ve built.
And the ending lands perfectly. He wins every battle, builds a kingdom, yet forgets the one promise everything was built on. It makes the final twist feel inevitable, if you forget the source of what you’re given, the price eventually returns.
Beautifully written, mythic yet psychological. Really enjoyed this piece. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Your reading and carefully examining each scene made me very happy. Thank you for your interest and support; wishing to meet again in new texts.
That means a lot, Dr. Murat, thank you.
Your story stayed with me long after I finished reading, so it was a joy to sit with each scene more closely. I’ll be glad to meet you again in future texts, please keep writing, the world needs more of this kind of mythic depth.
This is a great piece! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you for your nice comment.